I do believe that I have put a good amount of effort and work into trying to perfect the rhetorical analysis. I have spent more time rewriting sentences and shifting around quotes more than I did for the other papers that we had to do.
I do doubt, however, that I still put my best effort into the paper. There were times where I stuck in quotes that I didnt fully understand in order to lenghthen the paper, then had to go back and change them out with more sentences or diffferent quotes because they made the overall paper not make sense.
I feel my overall performance, howver, has been very good. I have gone to almost every class, and listened in depth to all the lectures and notes that have been given, and tried to incorporate them into my writing. The only things I belive that are left to be done for this paper are perfecting strcuture, and making a works cited.
I agree! I actually hand written some of my rhetorical analysis for my sources. I think the rhetorical analysis helped a lot though, it was able to break the source down to understand what the authors purpose was. I also had to rearrange a lot of my paper. I drafted this paper about seven times, cut out sources, and cut down my sentences. I think we both had some similar issues.
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